⏳Borrowed Minutes⌛

Posted: September 3, 2017 in Life as I see it...
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Ah! The grave anguish

Of meeting you again,

The mixed feelings of being with you,

the longing, the pain.

It has been a year,

we had that row.

And parted ways,

tried to let go..

Things didn’t work out

as I envisaged.

It’s probable, I am getting

difficult with age.

Don’t get me wrong,

I love to see you flourish.

Your triumphs, your laughter,

Your memories I cherish.

You flit in and out of my life.

This is your right.

Yet, fleeting is your attention,

blind, the sight.

The scant time you can accord

leads me to believe,

I won’t pass away with a regret,

the bond we forged will provide reprieve.

Overwhelmed with love and joy

of your company, I forgo the claim.

But do tell me if I deserve just

these Borrowed Minutes to my name..

  1. rahuldaga89 says:

    An unusual, unprecedented piece from you. And it’s gooood. More than just good. And no. You don’t deserve borrowed minutes at all. You got the whole prime time slot. 😛 😛

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  2. Appealing poem…straight from your heart…

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  3. Saurabh Gaur says:

    Woww… that’s great
    Just read it.. ❤

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  4. नीरज सक्सेना says:

    अंतिम दो पंक्तियां कविता को दर्द भरी पूर्णता प्रदान करती हैं । शानदार ।

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  5. Vaishali says:

    Good one….very well composed.👌

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  6. Aarti says:

    Nice lubhi well expressed ..

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  7. Shubhangi singh says:

    Wow!! You articulate beautifully what probably everyone’s feeling :).

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  8. Monika Raghuvanshi says:

    Beautiful lines

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  9. Shalini says:


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  10. Kavia says:

    Nice Lk
    Nice as always

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  11. Kavia says:

    Nice Lk
    Nice as always
    Keep writing

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  12. Reetu says:

    Nice lines, dear.

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  13. Shruti says:

    Nice lubhita

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  14. Sanjeev dalal says:

    Nicely writtn nd well said…

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  15. Gajendra says:

    when you love people enough to let them go, this act make your soul pure and beautiful same as the words you have used in borrowed Minutes.

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  16. Shweta Jain says:

    Hello miss poetess,,,, beautiful felt like reading it again and again
    Getting romantic ….

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  17. Mansi rathore says:

    Wow great… 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Raj Acharya says:

    For some people happiness comes easier than others, but what we’re starting to understand is that happiness — that sense of connection and ease of appreciating the good moments and being more graceful and resilient during the difficult ones — is a skill and strength that we can all build.

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